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托福独立写作模板托福写作过程中我们总是想要举例说明一些问题，但是又苦于没有合适的素材，这里就为大家提供一些很实用的托福独立写作模板。一、结构篇1、开头Sample one（适用于有一些or有一个可而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况（二选一，agree or disagree,除了个别）；On contemporary society（一般的背景）/With the advent of the technologically advanced society（the information explosive era（与科技有关的背景），XX（中心词）serves as a catalyst for our future success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in.../XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景，However,people（universities,government,citizen,society,government,）are/is invariably faced with such a question/can’t help wondering:改写题目1.Confucian（Yu Qiuyu,Mark Twain,William Shakespeare）,（one of）the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers（scholars,educators,writers,thinkers,statesmen）,has insightfully commented,"编”1 cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question:改写题目2.Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones（最后一定排比结尾，且如果字数够了这一句就不要）.要做的：想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目Sample two：（如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time,就用下面的）On contemporary society（—般的背景）/With the advent of the technologically advanced society（the information explosive era（与科技有关的背景））/On account of,XX（中心词）serves as a catalyst for our future success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in.../XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景（如so...that.../not only...but also）.However,when it comes to the choice between AA and BBAVhen asked about whether改写题目1,people get into a dilemma.According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concemed/From my perspective,I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写:Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones（最后一定才非比仑吉尾）/AA not only...but also（2）/There are various merits AA brings about,first of all,to...;secondly,to...;and lastly...⑶.要做的：想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起（最后写）2、分点一：分层论证Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from is that/First and foremost,On one hand,On the other hand Besides/What’s more/In addition.这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子！3、分点二：举例论证Further lending credence to my position is that（简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话）I can think of no better illustration than the example of（典型彳列子）/A case in point is that（不是很典型）,..…（例子见后面）一句话总结例子：As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样4、让步段：Agree or disagree:Admittedly,,to some extent,may directly or indirectly/has its undeniable detriments.For instance,However,the valuable merits of considerably overshadow the drawbacks/on no account./二选一：Admittedly,BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here.For example,（字数不够就多讲点）However,BB的缺点或AA也可以做到.Compared with AA,（which可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面,）it pales.5、结尾段：Therefore,due to the above mentioned reasons,which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them（字不够了用），I reinforce my stand point that改写题目3 Only via（by/through/with/when/after）can we;only via（by/through/with/when/after）can we;and only via（by/through/with/when/after）can we Or It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...（不好写或显得累赘就不要了）1、基本句型•因果On account of/owing to/due to+N For the reason that/as/since+句子It is due to that eg:It is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.（强调句）derive/arise/stem from来源于eg:His success derives from his persistence and perseverance.ascribe Ato B归结于eg:His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverance•条件A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success)If/on condition that/provided that/as long as•让步Despite the fact that/regardless of 2、经典句型•倒装1)Only via(by/through/with/when/after)—do/did/can we—ef:Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know about American typical type of spending leisure time.2)Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can__ef:Hardly can we imagine a world/our life without/devoid of 3)So+adj+主谓倒装+that—4)Not only主谓倒装but also...eg:Not only should education prepare children to compete Not only do people care their economic needs,they but also want to meet their spiritual needs.5)On no account主谓倒装(决不....)•强调It is/was....that/who(m)....•插入语1)限定性副词probably/directly or indirectly/to some(a large)extent 2)N+,ving,+v 3)同位语3、经典中的经典•排比1)It is tourism that gives me the opportunity to know the culture of this dynamic,robust and alive country.2)It is computers that make our life diverse,convenient,dynamic/vibrant,without which our life would probably pale.3)A/which needs to be/In this way,A can be readily accepted,respected,appreciated and advocated.4)Only via university education can we have systematic knowledge concerning arts and science.Only via university education can we know the essence of symbiosis and collaboration.And Only via university education can we meet the demands of society and make our future success inevitable.•十大副词1)Considerably 2)Invariably 3)Undoubtedly/indisputably/incontrovertibly 4)Increasingly 5)Most/exceedingly/exceptionally格外地6)Insightfully富有见底地7)Regrettably 8)Effectively and efficiently 9)Gradually and eventually 10)Readily•其他1)It is not difficult for us to imagine that不难想象2)B makes it possible for us to have an universal access to A/A is readily available.A容易得到3)In order to survive and thrive in this fiercely competitive society,people have no choice but to work and study hard.4)Ruthless and relentless无形/fierce and intense competition The ruthless and relentless competition imposes an unprecedented pressure on each and every individual,and therefore,there is no exaggeration to say that our innovative and inventive ability can lay a solid foundation for our future,enabling us to survive and thrive in the modem world.5）Inspiration,aspiration and perspiration 6）Vision,passion and mission 7）其他词语见最后清单pl20三、论证篇（详见讲义）1、模糊论证Range from...（其他见讲义）2、举例论证•自己的例子I can think of no better illustration than the example of my own visit to Singapore.Only after going shopping on Orchard road,the main shopping district in Singapore,did I realize what"a paradise for shopping"really was.Only after roaming in the City Hall,the financial center of Singapore,did I experience the quick pace of modem life.Only after lying on the beach of Sentosa did I know about the Singaporean typical way of spending leisure time.•名人的例子（Yu Minghong）•社会的例子For example,on account of the advent of the technologically advanced society,employers tend to hire people equipped with a wide range of knowledge rather than the ones with limited knowledge.3、数据论证I can think of no better illustration than the statistic.Experts from the Department of Sociology in Peking University pointed out that the average sleeping time an adult has everyday,compared with 8 hours in the 1970s,has decreased to 6.8 hours due to the busy work and study.4、引用论证（开头）5、假想论证Imagine/visualize/picture/suppose....