故事续写积累一、环境描写的素材环境描写分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物本身入手，主观则从观察者角度描写。通常在描写时主客观交替进行，主观描写比重稍大。客观环境描写：Part 1环境描写的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道the blue sky(蓝天）the songs of birds（鸟鸣）the thundering clouds（电光闪雷鸣）the fragile flowers(娇嫩的花）;（the dark,raining evening雨夜交加的夜晚）the green grass（青草）the fragrant roses（艳丽的玫瑰）;the setting/rising sun(落日/冉冉升起的太阳）…Part 2环境描写的verb（vi&vt）要求一)．Wind（blow/click/howl/wail/roar）1.A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain,…一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.The wind,soft and cold,clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。4.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.(冷风吹拂过我的头发）The wind was perfect for kite flying,blowing just hard enough to give some lift.（今日正是放风筝的好天气，强劲的风力带动了风筝的上升。）二)．Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)声音：1.At one point,the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。颜色2.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。3.A little way off was a small brook,rushing and sparkling along between green bank.离此不远,有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。4.It murmured in a soft voice like a little innocent girl whispered to her loving mother.似乎它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈爱的母亲细细私语。(action,sound,colour)三)．Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.The sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2.Blue skies stood tall and far蓝蓝的天空高高耸立主观环境描写：1.Sb found sth adj/doing/done某人发现某物（状态/动作/被）...2.Sb saw/heard/felt/smelt sth doing/done某人看到/听到/感到/闻到某物（状态/动作/被）3.It was so adj that we find/feel它是如此....以至于4.Sth kept sb spellbound/amazed/景物使我如此陶醉/惊讶/sth held sb entirely in their power景物让我完全惊呆了5.It looked/seemed/appeared/felt like…景物看起来像…二、场景描写的素材（来自原著：追风筝的人）1.At least two dozen kites already hung in the sky,like paper sharks roaming for prey.Within an hour,the number doubled,and red,blue,and yellow kites glided and spun in the sky.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.The wind was perfect for kite flying,blowing just hard enough to give some lift,make the sweeps easier.（放风筝的场景描写，从各个角度，立体描述）空中已经挂着至少二十来只风筝，如同纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎食物。不到一个钟头，这个数字翻了一番，红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞，熠熠生辉。寒冷的微风吹过我的头发。这风正适宜放风筝，风速不大，恰好能让风筝飘浮起来，也便于操控。2.The water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。3.Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites,red with long blue tails,soaring in the sky.They danced high above the trees on the west end of the park,over the windmills,floating side by side like a pair of eyes looking down on San Francisco,the city I now call home.（场景、比喻）我抬起头，望见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞动着，飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车，并排飘浮着，如同一双眼睛俯视着旧金山，这个我现在当成家园的城市。4.Blue skies stood tall and far,the sun like a branding iron searing the back of your neck.Creeks where Hassan and I skipped stones all spring turned dry,and rickshaws stirred dust when they sputtered by.（场景、比喻）天空一碧如洗，阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流打水漂，到了夏天它们也干涸了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵灰尘。5.Somewhere,a branch snapped,an owl hooted.The wind,soft and cold,clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.And from below,the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音，还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风微微拂动树枝，吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面，水流在山谷淌动，传来阵阵微弱的声音。6.By three o’clock,the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.A cool breeze blew through the park.（天气）到三点时，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布，一阵寒风吹过公园。7.The sun was beginning to set,glittering red through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings.（景象）太阳开始下山，那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝中，渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。三、描写时间，动作，心理和情感一)、情感好词：1.喜乐①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高兴得难以形容。
⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
⑪Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
⑫Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
⑬Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
⑭Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。
⑮Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激动得满脸通红。
⑯Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起喜悦。
⑰Iwasfloatingonair.我漂浮在空中。
⑱Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
2.愤怒：①Iwasseizedbyanger.我充满了愤怒。
②Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得大发雷霆。
③Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒爆发了。
④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。
⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨Heflaredupattheword.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得脸色阴沉。
3.悲伤烦恼①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。
⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑧Afrown（皱眉）nowstoodonhisface.他皱起了眉头。
⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
⑪Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他满是悲伤……⑫Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
⑬Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.这些日子他情绪低落。
4.害怕：①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...她感到恐惧……④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因恐惧而窒息。
⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
